Me podrían decir si esta bien escrito? Y que más le puedo poner?

Daniela is a beautiful girl. She is smaller than me. She has brown eyes and long black hair. She has a beautiful smile. When she smile, I smile because I like to see her happy. She is a responsible and prudent person. You can believe in her without any problem because you know that she will keep your secrets

PD: Les agradecería si me responden un poquito rápido ya que el deber es para mañana :/

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Daniela is a very responsible and prudent girl. A girl you can trust without any doubt because of how honest she is. Daniela is someone so special, and I hope I never lose her as my best friend.
There you go :) ahi tienes, ojala t sirva ;)
muchísimas gracias! :))
de nada querida.
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2014-01-28T04:12:56+01:00
Puedes agregarle también ''She likes Rock music, and plays guitar everyday. She likes to run in the morning listening to music.'' Y pues no se me ocurre más pero ponle cosas como de qué le gusta hacer XD
Hi, Mauro, How are u, man? jajajaja XDDDDD
yu haf girgried? okno ._.
Jajajajaja Hi Dayana, ai haf girgred pls ai am so guapo (? XDDDD
JAJAJA STUPID, YA NO COMENTES QUE MALOGRAMOS LA TAREA D; XDD
Jajajajajaja Ya ya :c
2014-01-28T04:24:36+01:00
También puedes agregarle su edad, el nombre de sus padres, cuántos hermanos tiene, una mascota: She is 15 years old, Her father's name is Pablo and her mother's name is Rosa. She has a litlle brother, his name is Franco, he is five years old. 
no es tanto por lo que le falte, si no que tiene varios errores. estudie ingles 6 a;os . dejame ayudarte