¿Podría alguien corregirme esta redacción de inglés? Es de nivel de 1ºBachillerato.

DO YOU LIKE HORROR STORIES?
I don't like horror stories at all.In fact,I hate them!,specially I hate those which are based on actual eventes.
I get goosebumps whenever I see an horror film.
Sometimes,I play it off,but really,they send me over the edge.
I'm easily freaked out,so I tend to stay away from horror stories and horror films.
Nevertheless,why do people like to read scary stories?Do they do it for a lark?
Researchs have shown that horror stories get your body ready for action by giving you and extra dose of adrenaline.
People like whatching horror films because they make them feel alive.
One efect of this is that horror stories,moreover,make you feel strong emotions and they encourage you explore the unknown.
Actually,seeing horror films,that is to say,whatching hair raising experiences,is one of the favourite hobbies of teenagers.

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                                   DO YOU LIKE HORROR STORIES?
I don't like horror stories at all. In fact,I  hate them!, specially I hate those which are based on actual events. I get goosebumps whenever I see an horror film.Sometimes, I play it off, but really, they make me scream a lot. I easily freak out, so I tend to stay away from horror stories and horror films. Nevertheless, why do people like to read scary stories? Do they do it for a lark? Researchs have shown that horror stories get your body ready for action, giving a extra dose of adrenaline. People like watching horror films because they make them feel alive. One effect of this is that horror stories, moreover, make you feel strong emotions and they encourage you to explore the unknown. Actually, seeing horror films, that is to say, watch lurid experiences, is one of the favourite hobbies of teenagers.
no tenías muchos fallos yo también estoy en 1º de bachillerato si tienes alguna duda te puedo ayudar, espero que te sirva. chao.
JAJAJAJAJ no son errores,son expresiones que son asi propiamente dichas,tales como "play it off" o "for a lark" .Sin embargo me ha gustado mucho tu correccion.Muchas gracias:)
jajaja ok entonces las vuelvo a dejar como estaban si quieres. es que no me gusta usar expresiones.
ya lo edité ¿qué tal ahora? la tenías muy bien, me gustó mucho.