hola alguien me pudiera ayudar en este texto yo lo hice pero no se si tiene errores tiene que tener pero no se cuales. Hi name`s roberto I'm 18 years old, Im salvadorian I was born in gotera. I studied in the instituto gerardo barrios but actually live in san salvador. Im living with my family my parents and two brothers they' re very intelligent but Im a few absent minded. I like english, well all lenguages I love lenguages, I wanna learn 4 lenguajes: portuguese, english, italian, german. I bought a italian book but it`s very difficult easier english but I only know some words and studied in a website: mansion en ingles but I only studied one month, its an excellent website but there are better website like englishtown.com, englishlink.com, inglesen100dias.com but sometimes I haven't time for study. I would like to learn english cuz I would understand englishmovies, music, news. besides is very important in the actually world, my hobbies are play video games, play basketball a few, play soccer I really like soccer but Im not very well and I like a little bolleyball my favorite team is barcelona on basketball and soccer they are the best player soccer Im exceted to be studing english and I hope to learn a lot at the end of my carreer and so I can teach others and to serve me a lot in my work

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2012-04-19T00:11:36+02:00

Has lo siguiente:Copia y pega en traductor, te dara errores como:

Hi name is Roberto, deberia ser Hi my name is Roberto, I am exceted, deberia ser I am excited, hice unos arreglos y dio mas menos asi, igual deberia hacer lo que te dije.

 

Hi my name is roberto I am 18 years old, Im salvadorian I was born in gotera. I studied in the instituto gerardo barrios but actually I live in san salvador. Im living with my family, my parents and two brothers they' re very intelligent but Im a few absent minded. I like  english, well all lenguages I love lenguages, I wanna learn 4 lenguajes: portuguese, english, italian, german. I bought a italian book but it is very difficult, easier is the english but I only know some words and studied in a website: mansion en ingles but I only studied one month, it is an excellent website but there are better website like englishtown.com, englishlink.com, inglesen100dias.com but sometimes I haven't time for study. I would like to learn english cuz I would understand english movies, music, news. besides is very important in the actually world, my hobbies are play video games, play basketball a few, play soccer I really like soccer but Im not very well and I like a little bolleyball my favorite team is barcelona on basketball and soccer they are the best player soccer I am excited to be studing english and I hope to learn a lot at the end of my carreer and so I can teach others and to serve me a lot in my work

Espero haberos iluminado, suerte.

2012-04-19T00:32:50+02:00

but actually live in san salvador ese es tu error tienes que cambiar esa parte

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