necesito saber si esta bien redactado . My best moment was exactly in the summer of 2007 when my familia and I travelled from Armenia still Island san Andrés,even was my grandmother she's had 92 that moment ,my cousins were very short,we spent for one week in a hotel ,everyday we did a thing different for example we knew the Island in car of golf ,thats was awesome,thats week was unforgotable because we joined everthing ,we swam,enjoyed and knew‏




es traveled y le podrias poner and still island san andres,.. todo lo demas est bien