Quisiera saber si la siguiente conversación esta bien redactada:

Peter: Hi July, where you going in the vacations?

July: Hi Peter, Hmm i don't know, maybe go to beach

Peter: Oh! Interesting, and you Bob? Where you going in the vacations?

Bob: I don't permitted go out alone in vacations

July: You aren't allowed? ¿Why?

Bob: I don't no know, maybe leave me in the future

Peter: Ok, no problem!

Bob: July, you take pictures in your vacations?

July: I may to take picture

Peter: Excelent, send to me for e-mail

Bob: Why not for facebook?

July: I don't have facebook, will i create tomorrow

Peter: Add me to facebook ok?

Bob: Also me. Peter why not in twitter?

Peter: I don't permitted have twitter

July:why you aren't allowed?

Peter: Because doesn't like my mother

Bob: Where you going in the vacations Peter?

Peter: I might go to visit my family

July: Ohh, it's amazing, well i have to go visit my boyfriend, bye guys!

Bob and Peter: Bye

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2013-04-05T01:51:25+02:00

Peter: Hi July, where are you going in the vacations?

July: Hi Peter, Hmm i don't know, maybe I´m going to the beach

Peter: Oh! Interesting, and you Bob? Where are you going in the vacations?

Bob: I am not allowed to go out alone in vacations

July: You aren't allowed? ¿Why?

Bob: I don't know, maybe they leave me go in the future (no estoy segura aca :()

Peter: Ok, no problem!

Bob: July,will you take pictures in your vacations?

July: I will maybe take pictures

Peter: Excelent, send them to me by e-mail

Bob: Why not by facebook?

July: I don't have facebook,I will create it  tomorrow

Peter: Add me to facebook ok?

Bob: Also me. Peter why not in twitter?

Peter: I´m not allowed to have twitter

July:why you aren't allowed?

Peter: Because my mother don´t like it...

Bob: and... where are you going in the vacations Peter?

Peter: I might go to visit my family

July: Ohh, it's amazing, well i have to go visit my boyfriend, bye guys!

Bob and Peter: Bye

SUERTE... CREO QUE ESTA BIEN :)

2013-04-05T01:56:52+02:00

bueno pue ssi estan muy bien escrita

por que si la traducimos al español seria asi :

 

Peter: Hola Julio, donde se va en las vacaciones?
Julio: Hola Pedro, Hmm no sé, tal vez ir a la playa
Peter: Oh! Interesante, y Bob? ¿Dónde ir en las vacaciones?
Bob: No permitido salir sola en vacaciones
Julio: No se permiten? ¿Por qué?
Bob: No no sé, tal vez me deje en el futuro
Peter: Ok, no hay problema!
Bob: Julio, permite tomar fotos en sus vacaciones?
Julio: se me permite tomar la imagen
Peter: Excelent, envíe a mí por e-mail
Bob: ¿Por qué no para el facebook?
Julio: Yo no tengo facebook, voy a crear mañana
Peter: Me gustaría facebook ok?
Bob: También yo. Peter por qué no en twitter?
Peter: Yo no tengo permitido Twitter
Julio: ¿por qué no se le permite?
Peter: Porque no le gusta mi madre
Bob: ¿A dónde vas en el Peter vacaciones?
Peter: Yo podría ir a visitar a mi familia
Julio: Ohh, es increíble, así que tengo que ir a visitar a mi novio,  adios chicos!
Bob y Peter: adios