Quisiera saber si la siguiente conversación esta bien redactada:
Peter: Hi July, where you going in the vacations?
July: Hi Peter, Hmm i don't know, maybe go to beach
Peter: Oh! Interesting, and you Bob? Where you going in the vacations?
Bob: I don't permitted go out alone in vacations
July: You aren't allowed? ¿Why?
Bob: I don't no know, maybe leave me in the future
Peter: Ok, no problem!
Bob: July, you take pictures in your vacations?
July: I may to take picture
Peter: Excelent, send to me for e-mail
Bob: Why not for facebook?
July: I don't have facebook, will i create tomorrow
Peter: Add me to facebook ok?
Bob: Also me. Peter why not in twitter?
Peter: I don't permitted have twitter
July:why you aren't allowed?
Peter: Because doesn't like my mother
Bob: Where you going in the vacations Peter?
Peter: I might go to visit my family
July: Ohh, it's amazing, well i have to go visit my boyfriend, bye guys!
Bob and Peter: Bye